Microfiction Monday

Welcome to Microfiction Monday,
where a picture only paints 140 characters.

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Susan at Stony River has begun a Microfiction Monday wherein participants write a story in 140 characters or less based on a particular image that Susan has chosen for the day.  Design 215’s Character Counter helps keep track of the number of characters. It’s a fun exercise in creative conciseness…or concise creativity… You can visit Susan’s to see some very creative stories for today.

The picture for today and my take on it:

“Jane, darling, it’s John. I was wrong. I’ve been so miserable. Could I see you again?”

“Jane,” called Rob from the kitchen, “Who called?”

9 thoughts on “Microfiction Monday

    • Well, it wasn’t supposed to sound like a torrid love affair but rather an old boyfriend wanting to renew acquaintances after “Jane” had moved on.

      But I think Melli’s answer would be the best thing to tell “John.” 🙂

  1. Oh no, poor John! And what can poor Jane do but pretend it was the gas man or something ROFL.

    What we’ve put this poor girl through this week–I don’t want to answer my phone anymore!

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